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  • Yeah, the smoke’s also there in panel 2. The way I see it, Nemi is holding the cigarette below the table in both panels 2 and 4. It’s a little awkward to think that she swapped hands between panels 3 and 4, but not a huge deal. I’m a little more disturbed by Nemi blowing second-hand smoke into Cyan’s face in panel 2, but maybe sh’es enough at an angle that it isn’t noticeable.



  • Sergio@piefed.socialOPtoComic Strips@lemmy.worldNemi - New Year's Resolutions (fan edit)
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    Great question! I’m just using this as a fun way to learn more about GIMP and about the structure of cartoons. After maybe 1-2 more of these I’ll prolly move on to something else.

    So, specifically about the wording: I don’t have access to the original Norwegian, only what I find floating around the web. I encourage Norwegians to look at http://nemi.no/ which directs them to the artist’s Facebook page with links to a store for the physical comics in Norwegian, which they can buy to support the artist.

    I think the ones I find online were translated into UK English. As a learning exercise I “translate” it to American English, which is my native language. I personally tend to be kinda wordy, so as an exercise I try to minimize the number of words used. I also think a lot about the specific words used. Like in the copy that I found, Nemi says “Tons” which is kindofa British way of saying things. For a while I had that at “Lots” which is more American. At the last minute I changed it to “Plenty” bc I thought it flowed better. But now I’m thinking of changing it back. (idk, got any thoughts?) (EDIT: after thinking about it all day, I changed her utterance to “Sure.”) In the strip I found, Cyan (Nemi’s friend) said “Do you have any…” which I thought was kinda wordy, so I changed it to “Got any…”. BUT THE THING IS, I realize that “wordiness” says a lot about a character! i.e. it contributes to the perceived personality of the character. So minimizing the number of words is not always the right answer. Anyway, by going through this exercise, it helped me think this over and really internalize the importance of word choice.