• StudSpud The Starchy@aussie.zone
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    1 year ago
    dear raven poem

    Dear Raven, my friend, this is no war,
    Poetry brings us together, an open door.
    All are welcome here to write and rhyme,
    Express thyself, in or out of time.
    Worry not about beats, no beatings today,
    Just peace, and venting, in a fun way.
    So come join us, write a fine ditty,
    We are just humans, and we’re all so pretty!

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      1 year ago

      Hell naw! this is a war
      'cos writings what I live for
      You better be on your game
      If you think you can tame
      This beast, and make a name
      For yourself. I ain’t play’n

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        1 year ago
        stupid rap

        Yo, sit down and check it
        Before you mess up
        And wreck it
        This is a war of attrition
        My rhymes are not missin’
        We all know I’m winnin’
        In this game of prose-chicken
        So be aware of where you tread
        Don’t let the rhymes go to your head
        Though poems aren’t my buttered bread
        My lines are tight and won’t be shred

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          Yo chill playa, i weren’t talkin no smack
          But shit, now that you’re bringin’ it… Your rhymes are whack
          They lackin’, you slackin’, you tracking to go broke
          This ain’t no joke. Your rhymes, yeh they keep time
          But mine? They come with that essence, that effervescence
          Maybe I’ll teach you some time if you can keep that ego in line
          🎤⬇️🤛

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            1 year ago
            lame reply poem

            I fell asleep before I saw this diss,
            You win, my friend, sorry for this.
            I didn’t turn up and reply in rhyme,
            Your word’s superior, for now and all time.\

            o7

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      My dear StudChud I am properly chastened
      Into a battle I should not have hastened
      It’s the daily thread, here for friends and fun
      And the beats and rhymes are for everyone

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        the joy of prose i suppose

        No shame to be had, only joyous celebration!
        The dawn is upon us, a cold but welcome revelation.
        For most are readying, eating, and showering,
        To work all day under their bosses brows, glowering
        But this thread, daily and constant, bring hope to us suffering
        That we are accepted, a rare and wonderful thing <3