Thank you so much for the advice! I decided that I’ll rewrite the script using most of the tips you gave me, specifically:

Adding more personality. Giving my character a name. Writing the script in present tense (if I understood you correctly) Adding details that the viewer can’t see as opposed to what they can see

I am writing the script to entertain people, not so much for myself. I don’t have an inane desire to write, but I do have an inane desire to entertain people. I feel as though let’s plays are too done, and I need to try something new.

Do I have any writing skill, or am I more or less wasting my time here?

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We both decided long ago that we have no plans whatsoever to have kids and don’t want them, so fatherhood has nothing to do with it

I don’t really know. I don’t know what kind of things I could do besides volunteering, and that’s not really that big of a thing here.

Fair enough. I do ride my bike quite a bit and go to the gym, try to make myself better physically. I could probably find at least somewhere where I could help out.

We are engaged and she knew that I didn’t work 2 years ago when we started dating. I give her around 1/4 of the local salary each month to spend on herself and cover rent, food, etc etc.

My annuity is for life. As long as the dollar doesn’t crash (which it could), I’m set for life. If the dollar crashes - well she’ll have to go live with her parents for a bit while I figure everything out with getting a job (which I am in no way against doing if I need to.)

I have an annuity I got from a malpractice settlement that gives me more than enough to live in the country I’m in.

She does say that it doesn’t have to be a way to make money, but she wants me to “develop myself” somehow.

Lol doesn’t matter what he wants: no one is going to approve it.

How about fuck you, Netflix.

Tater tots and prayers.

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He also said “no more discussing politics, goodbye” as if it’s not a question of morals, just politics.

I don’t think the sadness of losing his son will be stronger than his hatred of people who are darker skinned than he is.

Yes it does. Apparently, when he was younger (until 9/11), he was a liberal. Then he went down the conservative talk radio pipeline (I also listened as a kid) and we see where that always goes.

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The lack of Medicare will do that eventually. He lives in a deep red state, so.

His job is also in the health industry, so that probably will go wrong as well.

You are correct.

If Americans were doing “something”, DC would be burning to the ground already like in 1812. The French would have destroyed Paris by now. They have for much less.

Not as much brain damage as any MAGAt.

The bike is pretty new, should Lubricate it again just in case?