Parsani [love/loves, comrade/them]@hexbear.net to chapotraphouse@hexbear.netEnglish · edit-211 months ago💦Drink democracy's last drop💦hexbear.netimagemessage-square23fedilinkarrow-up132arrow-down10file-text
arrow-up132arrow-down1image💦Drink democracy's last drop💦hexbear.netParsani [love/loves, comrade/them]@hexbear.net to chapotraphouse@hexbear.netEnglish · edit-211 months agomessage-square23fedilinkfile-text
minus-squareBelieveRevolt [he/him]@hexbear.netlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up17·11 months agoYeah, apart from the content this is just terrible. I’m always shocked by how many write poetry and have never seemingly heard of the concept of meter. At least read it out loud first.
minus-squareGraphite22 [he/him, comrade/them]@hexbear.netlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up10·11 months agoGoing to bring back proper poetry out of sheer spite just so I can kill it for good.
Yeah, apart from the content this is just terrible. I’m always shocked by how many write poetry and have never seemingly heard of the concept of meter. At least read it out loud first.
Going to bring back proper poetry out of sheer spite just so I can kill it for good.