• HiImDavid@alien.topB
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    10 months ago

    Even if there was a replacement available, how do people not know by now that the Bears do not fire coaches in season? It will never happen no matter how bad it gets while the Mccaskeys are the owners.

  • ProfessorLiftoff@alien.topB
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    10 months ago

    I really wish that anyone who wanted to be an influencer or creator would first take a writing class and attack their scripts the same way they would a 5-paragraph essay.

    Give your introduction, and why we’re here. Give your pieces of evidence, one by one, to elocute your point. Finally, provide your conclusion as evidenced by your examples. There’s a reason Jason Pargin, NYT bestselling author and editor of Cracked.com for a decade, is so good at TikTok.

    Here, the guys making a writing 101 mistake - he’s started with the conclusion he wants us to draw. Okay, fine, what evidence does he have?

    The answer is none. He just restates that conclusion, over and over in different color phrasing. Rookie stuff.

  • xtow16@alien.topB
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    10 months ago

    I agree with this guy but people on TikTok talking at their phone will always be cringe to me