• jet@hackertalks.com
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    7 months ago

    This kind of feels like it was written by a large language model. There’s lots of content. But there’s no through line. No cohesive narrative tying it all together.

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      7 months ago

      Ironic when they’re trying to talk about Corporations Cutting Corners, eh?

    • AnarchistArtificer@slrpnk.net
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      7 months ago

      Yeah, I noticed the same thing. Lots of paragraphs that start with “[person/thing] is [context/role]”. I wonder whether it’s actually human written, but they poorly integrated too many individual perspectives into the article. Building a narrative from fragments in this way takes a lot of skill to pull off, perhaps they were too ambitious (or too cautious — I’ve seen this pitfall when the writer is too tentative in making their own argument on a spicy topic)