Some quick feedback:

The two things that draw my attention are the person looking away and the black blob in the top right. The black blob mostly feels like a distraction. The person is not well lit and almost hard to see compared with the almost over exposed foreground. There’s a lot of interesting stuff in the picture but kinda mixed messages for what to focus on with the parts in focus being so dim.

I would try cropping much tighter around the subject and see if you can find a stronger composition.

OM-1 Olympus 45 mm f/1.2 lense @ ISO 250 f/1.4 1/16000 ss -0,3 ev.

Thanks I appreciate feedback!